| Its just a bit of fun, but i have
no idea whether its good or not, i
couldnt wait for stephanie meyer to
write another book, so i thought
i'd give it ago lmao. i
quickly edited the first paragraph
because i realised i hadnt
described edward and bella, so
sorry if that bits a bit crap :(
anyway, i hope anyone who loves
twilight likes it , im not trying
to steal the twilight storyline, it
just some fun :)
sorry its a bit long aswell :)
resemme; 16th birthday
“happy birthday!” the eight
blurry figures shouted, dragging me
back to the day i’d longed so
much for. i groaned, i did not want
him to see me like this. not today.
it took me a while to adjust to the
familiar faces that surrounded my
bed, a bright smile was plastered
on each one, accept for two. bella,
my mother was giving me the
impression that if she could cry
she would, which was so stupidly
like her. her long brown hair
clipped up and just curving the
outline of her pale face, her brown
eyes gleamed. the last unsmiling
face was edwards, a slight line
appearing in his colourless
features, his hand reaching for his
messy reddish brown hair, as he
frowned in frustration of my first
thought; jacob, he’d read it in
my mind as clearly as i’d thought
it, and a blush flashed across my
face, the memory buried there.
“open mine first nessie!” alice
chuckled throwing a small
rectangular box at my stomach, i
grinned at my aunty, she always got
excited over birthdays, the more
extravagant the better. my fingers
slide the bow off, my eyes fixed on
to it, avoiding the pair i didn’t
want to meet at all, and the pair i
didn’t want to meet again. the
present was covered lightly with
tissue paper, it rustled slightly,
and revealed a silver chain, with a
small heart hanging on to it
delicately, a locket.
“oh its beautiful, thanks
alice,” i mumbled, blushing
again, she always spent so much on
gifts, i could take a good guess
this was worth more than all my
other jewellery put together. i
opened it, one side was covered
with white diamonds, reflecting the
sunlight gently, the other was
blank, a place to put a
photograph.
“its off jasper too.” alice
chimed, and jasper grinned at me,
putting his arm around her. they
looked perfect together, both
petite, only alice had dark short
hair, and more pixie like features,
jasper was blonde, with big hair,
and long cheekbones. both of them
pale and beautiful.
“thanks you guys,” i repeated,
placing it back in the oblong box.
“here you go nessie, happy
birthday!” emmett, my other uncle
said, and rosalie passed me a
weirdly shaped present, they
grinned at each other as my face
lit up, i could tell what it was
without opening it. my guitar, that
wasn’t technically mine until
today, but i’d stared at it long
enough in barkers window to claim
it as my own months ago. it was
even more exquisite unwrapped and
in front of my eyes instead of
behind a wall of glass.
“oh my god, this is amazing,
thank you!” i squealed, at them,
rosalie’s face was even more
beautiful when she smiled, her long
blonde hair passing over her
shoulders, and her breath taking
features still made me stare even
now. emmett took the guitar out of
my hands, its new home, his massive
muscles not even tweaked by my
resistance, his black hair didn’t
move an inch out of place, his
bright eyes gleaming at my
disgruntled expression. “you have
to open the rest of your presents,
or they might think you like ours
was the best.” he joked, alice
stuck her tongue out at him;
“you wouldn’t of known what to
get her if i hadn’t-” she
began.
“i’m sure edward will tell us
later, that ours was clearly the
best,” he continued, laughing,
alice scowled. of course she had
told them what i was going to buy
with my birthday money, her ability
to see the future meant birthdays
were a piece of cake, unless of
course it was hers and the surprise
was ruined. i missed my guitar
already, but i rearranged my face
in mock surprise for the parcel, my
grandfather, carlisle passed me.
him and his wife esme stood
together, far too young to be
grandparents, but that was the gift
of never being able to age, his
hair was blonde like jaspers but
shorter, with pale characteristics
that all my family had, even me.
esme had dark chocolate brown hair,
in lose curls around her short
face, she was shorter than carlisle
by a few inches, her head resting
on his shoulder.
“happy birthday sweetheart”
esme wished, smiling. i looked down
at the parcel, it was square and
heavy. a camera was pictured on the
front, they had bought me a video
camera, a few years better than my
old battered one that was sat on
the table beside my bed. words
escaped me as i attempted to thank
them, i hated opening presents this
expensive it was intimidating.
edward chuckled, and everyone
looked up at him, i hoped my face
wouldn’t give away that it was me
that he was laughing at. he mumbled
something about what jacob was
thinking, and as this wasn’t a
day to start an argument, jacob
agreed quickly, eve
edward chuckled, and everyone
looked up at him, i hoped my face
wouldn’t give away that it was me
that he was laughing at. he mumbled
something about what jacob was
thinking, and as this wasn’t a
day to start an argument, jacob
agreed quickly, even laughing
himself. i frowned at his sucking
up, it was starting to annoy the
hell out of me.
“thank you!” i said, grinning
at my grandparents, they grinned
back. i looked towards my mother,
as she looked up at edward, he
handed me a card, i knew exactly
what this was; a blank cheque fell
out of the card, it was signed, the
dotted line for money left blank, i
looked up confused
“it depends what college you go
to, they all have different amounts
for the first term so we left it
for you to fill in,” my mother
answered, she was good at reading
my face, too many times had she
told me i was too much like
herself.
“open your other present then,”
edward pleaded. “its kind of
special.” i reached out for the
tiny box that i’d forgot about on
the bed, it was wrapped in shiny
silver paper, and my hands wandered
curiously over it, tearing the
careful wrapping away. inside lay a
silver ring, with three rubies set
in its band. i was gob smacked, it
was one of the most beautiful
things i’d ever seen, i was too
scared to even touch, never mind
wear
“it was my mothers engagement
ring,” he explain, and i knew he
wasn’t on about esme, his adopted
mother. “i gave her wedding ring
to your mother, i figured it was
only right that you get this
one.” he smiled, the words
“thank you” ran over and over
in my brain, and he chuckled as he
read them.
“thanks mum,” i added,
forgetting she couldn’t read my
thoughts. the trouble with me was i
was too forgetful, i’d made a
mental note last night to quickly
excuse myself to the bathroom
before i’d got round to having to
see jacob, i’d left it too late
now, distracted by all the
presents, and if i made an excuse
now he’d know what i was doing.
crap. my father coughed, and i
blushed again, this was going to be
too awkward.
i turned to face jacob black, he
was smiling, his perfect teeth
gleaming in the bright light,
standing out from his lightly
tanned skin. i stared at his face,
marvelling at how beautiful and
amazing it was, his brown eyes
stared into mine, and my heart
started beating faster. “happy
birthday day nessie!” he said,
the excitement hidden, his mind was
trying to focus on other things, so
that my father wouldn’t hear. i
knew him too well.
“we’ll leave you two alone,”
esme said, pulling on carlisle
arms, the others glanced at her and
began re treating out the room two
seconds later. edward and bella
were the only two who remained.
“dad-”
h e turned to jacob; “if you even
think one thing that’s out of
line-”
“edward, stop it, its
reesemse’s birthday for god
sake!” my mother started, and she
placed one hand on his shoulder.
“lets just give them a minute,
then they’ll come downstairs,
okay?”
“i’ll be listening,” he
warned before they closed the door
after them, and my heart was an
inch aw
away from exploding.
i'll try to write some more,
and then post it on here :)
and i have a few idea of my own,
that i've had for a while, i
just need the time to sita nd
really write them :)
thanks for all the good comments :)
i'll try to write some more,
and then post it on here :)
and i have a few idea of my own,
that i've had for a while, i
just need the time to sita nd
really write them :)
thanks for all the good comments :)
i'll try to write some more,
and then post it on here :)
and i have a few idea of my own,
that i've had for a while, i
just need the time to sita nd
really write them :)
thanks for all the good comments :)
i'll try to write some more,
and then post it on here :)
and i have a few idea of my own,
that i've had for a while, i
just need the time to sita nd
really write them :)
thanks for all the good comments :)
yeah bella should have amber eyes,
sorry i went through edward and
bells discription really fast,
because i forgot about it, so yeah
amber, thanks :)
"I didn't think that this was
going to be good..."
Right now all I can say is WOW!!! You are an amazing writer. I didn't think that this was going to be good, but I couldn't keep myself from reading this. I really like how you write, but I would like to read something that is entirely your own. Please write your own story, and post some of it. I want to read more of your works. |
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