U find wrong. we had to use 3rd
person liek someone and could only
use i in the intro and conclusion!
thanks for all ur help! where the
stars are in the second paragraph i
need a good school 2 go 2!! please
help
for my whole life, i’ve wanted to
be somebody who could make a
difference in not just one, a lot
of kids’ lives. i want to help
them overcome obstacles and face
their fears. i want to guide
students and help them make tough
decisions. i want to be there when
they are confused and need help.
what do i want to be? i want to be
a teacher and change the aspect of
school in kids’ eyes.
it takes quite a bit of education
to become an educator. education
requirements vary from place to
place but they are most likely the
same. someone who wants to be a
teacher has to have at least a
bachelor’s degree in an approved
teacher training program. someone
who wants to be a teacher must take
courses in the subject they want to
teach. they must take and pass an
exam and have to receive
certification as a teacher. it is
mandatory that a trainee spends
several months as a student teacher
under the supervision of an
experienced teacher. it is
necessary that they attend
education conferences and summer
workshops to get further training.
a college a teacher-to-be can
attend could be***************.
there are many skills someone needs
to have in order to become a
teacher. some abilities needed to
be a teacher are to be patient and
corporative. that is very important
because teachers need to be patient
with students or they shouldn’t
be a teacher. they have to be able
to plan and arrange assignments, to
evaluate students, and be very
helpful. some skills most people
need to improve on are being able
to be honest with grading, clarity
and to not be shy.
teachers have many
responsibilities. some
responsibilities consist of are
being able to guide, help, and work
with kids. this job can be
challenging depending on the
location of the school and having
to deal with school and home
problems. teachers need to be able
to evaluate student work honestly.
some working conditions are that
teachers need to be present for
classes, usually twelve to sixteen
hours a week. most states require
schools to be in session for a
minimum number of days, usually in
a ten month schedule with a two
month vacation.
the average teacher is paid just
about over $42,000 a year,
according to
http://www.wikipedia.org/. pay
depends on educational level,
experience, and the school, the
district and the state. the cost of
living in certain areas heavily
influences the amount of money.
benefits depend on the school but
some are usually healthcare. some
pros of teaching are being able to
work with great kids, the ability
to be a role model, being able to
fix whatever got messed up the day
before, having most of the summer
is free of work, and good benefits.
some teacher benefits would
sometimes include healthcare. some
cons of teacher are the environment
in which the school is, and dealing
with parents.
demands for being a teacher are
that there’s always going to be a
need for new teachers. according to
www.kinderart.com, there’s been
an increased demand for secondary
teachers. there has also been
shortages of teachers may occur in
urban and rural schools. there is a
request for more male teachers
everywhere. demands will increase
in the future.
i want to be a teacher and change
the aspect of school in kids’
eyes. i want this job because i
want to help, guide, and teach
kids. i want to make a difference
in the boring meaning of teaching.
i learned that it takes a lot to be
a teacher. i will need to go to
school for about four years and
there is going to be an increase in
need for teachers in urban areas,
where i would like to teach. after
doing this research, i learned that
i really want to become a teacher
and someday will.
yea someone will read it. u
obviously have nuttin better to do
then look at a question, doubt it,
and just get ur 2 pts. woah- big
accomplishment. =] ill remember
that when u ask somethin....
*Don't use contractions in formal writing
For my whole life,
I have wanted to be someone who could make a difference in not just one child's life,
but a lot of children's lives.
I want to help them overcome obstacles and face their fears.
I want to guide students and help them make tough decisions.
I want to be there when they are confused and need help.
What do I want to be?
I want to be a teacher and change the aspect of school in kids’ eyes.
It takes quite a bit of education to become an educator.
Education requirements vary from place to place but they are generally the same.
Someone who wants to be a teacher has to have at least a bachelor’s degree in an approved teacher training program.
Also,
they must take courses in the subject they want to teach.
They have to take and pass an exam as well as receive certification as a teacher.
It is mandatory that a trainee spends several months as a student teacher under the supervision of an experienced teacher.
It is necessary that they attend education conferences and summer workshops to get further training.
A college a teacher-to-be can attend could be***************.
There are many skills someone needs to have in order to become a teacher.
Some abilities needed to be a teacher include being patient and corporative.
These are very important because teachers need to be patient with students or they should not be a teacher.
They have to be able to plan and arrange assignments,
evaluate students,
and be very helpful.
Some skills most people need to improve on are being able to be honest with grading,
clarity and to not be shy.
Teachers have many responsibilities.
Some responsibilities include being able to guide,
help,
and work with kids.
This job can be challenging depending on the location of the school and having to deal with school as well as home problems.
Teachers need to be able to evaluate student work honestly.
Some working conditions are that teachers need to be present for classes,
usually twelve to sixteen hours a week.
Most states require schools to be in session for a minimum number of days,
usually in a ten month schedule with a two month vacation.
The average teacher is paid just about over $42,000 a year,
according to
http://www.wikipedia.org/. Pay depends on educational level,
experience,
and the school,
the district and the state.
The cost of living in certain areas heavily influences the amount of money.
Benefits depend on the school but healthcare is usually included.
Some pros of teaching are being able to work with great kids,
the ability to be a role model,
being able to fix whatever got ruined the day before,
having most of the summer is free of work,
and good benefits.
Some cons of teacher are the environment in which the school is,
and dealing with parents.
Demands for being a teacher are that there’s always going to be a need for new teachers.
According to
http://www.kinderart.com, there’s been an increased demand for secondary teachers.
There has also been shortages of teachers may occur in urban and rural schools.
There is a request for more male teachers everywhere.
Demands will increase in the future.
I want to be a teacher and change the aspect of school in kids’ eyes.
I want this job because I want to help,
guide,
and teach kids.
I want to make a difference in the boring meaning of teaching.
I learned that it takes a lot to be a teacher.
I will need to go to school for about four years and there is going to be an increase in need for teachers in urban areas,
where I would like to teach.
After doing this research,
I learned that I really want to become a teacher and someday will.
Hope this helps
:)