| My mate big adventure
the door of the left room in the
5th floor of the building, in the
corner of morningside ct, and
sunset blvd opens in a hurry. he
goes true the room until he reaches
me, and he told me: why you are not
in the car, sebastian? i answer him
looking true a window the big sing
of hollywood in the mountain. i was
searching for a new camera the
other one is not working; i already
get the new one ben. we go down
stairs and go into the car. ben
told me to turn on my camera now.
there i ask ben about his project.
he told me while he drives to
marina del rey’s port. he told me
he wants to film a documental of
his trip around the world, also
that he chose me as his cameraman
he want me to film his entire trip
then edit it to a film. he laughs
and say is going to be fun,
anything that happen will be
recorded there is not guide.
when we arrive to the port it was
10:15 am of november 3. ben talk to
the ship master it was a big ship.
ben pays the boat with the
agency’s credit card they told us
we can spend as much as we want.
the agency was the one that sponsor
us. this ship will take us to japan
in 1 week and a half; with out
stuck. we sail immediately, in the
ship i think it was the begging of
a long trip. the clime was really
good the ship was going with good
speed.
onboard ben told me all about the
trip the cities we are stopping and
places we are going.
we arrive to tokyo japan in
november 13.
when we go down the boat and saw
tokyo we were impressed it was a
city full of tall buildings it was
really small compared with los
angeles. he wants us to go around
the city before we take the
airplane to china. we start going
around and we see the japanese know
a lot of technology. there are a
lot of people over 12millions in
this little town. late we take the
metro and go to kita one of the
most important neighborhoods in
tokyo. there we eat the typical
food while we speck with japanese
that speak english like us. he told
us that there was an international
film festival the next day in
shibuya other neighborhood of
tokyo. when we finish we took a bus
to shibuya; we search for hours but
we don’t find it we were so
disappointed, we decide to fly away
from tokyo to china that night.
we don’t want to see more
oriental people so we only change
of airplane there. now we were in
el cairo egypt with one of the
hottest temperature i ever feel. we
rent a camel and go to the pyramids
and go inside of the biggest one,
it make me feels strange like a
mystic force there we saw a scarab
of the size of my hand and i record
it ben was so proud because it was
a really strange event. when we go
out of the pyramids we ask a man if
he can film us in the entrance of
the pyramid. instead he start
running he try to steal our camera
we run as fast as we can but he run
faster but we were very thirsty.
the sand doesn’t let us run
faster. seconds later something
unexpected happen the robber start
screaming of pain he say a scorpion
bite him. we catch him and took the
camera and we also saw the scorpion
we start shouting for help until an
egyptian see us and he ask for help
with a mobil.
another hard day for us and all was
recorded. the next day in the
morning we take an air plane to
portugal but there was a problem
with the airport, so we land in
spain and go from there to new
york. when we were landing we saw
the statue of liberty, the empire
state and the streets full of
traffic and make us feel in our
country after all. when we land we
took a car and drive true all usa
it take us 4 days going in the
speedways. once there i and ben
speak of our adventure and the film
we edited and make a tv series.
the end
dude ty verry much i will make u to
get more than 10 poitns i will ask
stupid questions and say ur anwerr
is the best one lol ty!!
dude ty verry much i will make u to
get more than 10 poitns i will ask
stupid questions and say ur anwerr
is the best one lol ty!!
My Mate Big Adventure
The door on the left room on the 5th floor of the building, in the corner of Morningside ct, and sunset blvd opens in a hurry. He goes through the room until he reaches me, and he asks me: "Why you are not in the car, Sebastian?" I answer him looking through a window the big sign of Hollywood on the mountain. "I was searching for a new camera the other one is not working". "I already got the new one Ben." We go down stairs and get into the car. Ben told me to turn on my camera now. There I ask Ben about his project. He told me while he drives to Marina Del Rey’s port. He told me he wants to film a documentary of his trip around the world, also that he chose me as his cameraman he wants me to film his entire trip then edit it to a film. He laughs and says it is going to be fun, anything that happens will be recorded there is not a guide.
When we arrive at the port it was 10:15 am of November 3. Ben talks to the ship master. It was a big ship. Ben pays the boat with the agency’s credit card they told us we can spend as much as we want. The agency was the one that sponsored us. This ship will take us to Japan in 1 week and a half; with out stopping. We sail immediately, in the ship I think to myself it is the beginning of a long trip. The clime was really good the ship was going with good speed.<?
Once aboard Ben tells me all about the trip and the cities we are stopping and places we are going.
We arrive to Tokyo Japan in November 13.
When we go down the boat and see Tokyo we were impressed it was a city full of tall buildings it was really small compared to Los Angeles. He wants us to go around the city before we take the airplane to china. We start going around and we see the Japanese have a lot of technology. There are a lot of people over 12 million in this little town. Late we take the metro and go to Kita one of the most important neighborhoods in Tokyo. There we eat the typical food while we speak with Japanese that speak English like us. He told us that there was an International Film Festival the next day in Shibuya another neighborhood of Tokyo. When we finish we took a bus to Shibuya; we search for hours but we don’t find it, we were so disappointed, we decide to fly away from Tokyo to china that night.
We do not wish to see more oriental people so we only change of airplane there. Now we were in El Cairo Egypt with one of the hottest temperature I've ever felt. We rent a camel and go to the pyramids and go inside one of the biggest ones, it make me feels strange like a mystic force there we saw a scarab the size of my hand and I record it Ben was so proud because it was a really strange event. When we got out of the pyramids we asked a man if he can take a picture of us in the entrance of the pyramid. Instead he starts running and he tries to steal our camera, we ran as fast as we could but he was too fast, and we were very thirsty. The sand slows us down. Seconds later something unexpected happened the thief starts screaming in pain he yells a scorpion has stung him. We catch him and take the camera and we also see the scorpion. We started shouting for help until an Egyptian saw us and he asks for help with a car.
Another hard day for us and all was recorded. The next morning we take an airplane to Portugal but there was a problem with the airport, so we land in Spain and go from there to New York. When we were landing we saw the statue of liberty, the empire state building and the streets full of traffic and make us feel in our country after all. When we landed we took a car and drove through the US it took us 4 days going in the highways, and interstates. Once there Ben and I spoke of our adventure and the film we edited it to make a TV series.
You have a basic Idea of English and on some of this I could not correct because I wasn't sure that I understood what you meant but for the most part this is now Grammatically correct. |
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